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（一）审题错误

taibaimountainisafamousplaceofinterestinshaanxiprovince.ithasitsspecialscenesalltheyearround，andspringisthebesttimetovisitit.whenspringcomes，themountainsarecoveredwithagreatmanygreentalltreesandallkindsofcolorfulwildflowers.itissobeautifulthatalotofvisitorscomehereandenjoyitsbeautyeveryday.butafewyearsago，someofthevisitorspaidnoattentiontoprotectingtheenvironment.theyusedtothrowlotsofrubbishsuchasplasticbags，fruitskinsandwastepaperontheground.sometimestheybrokesomebranches，pickedflowersandevenkilledbirds.someevenmadefiresintheforesttocookfood.howdangerousitwas。luckilyenough，thelocalgovernmenthasbeguntodosomethingtostoppollutingthearea.greatchangeshavetakenplacehere.

（二）文体格式错误

monday，march12th，2007sunny

itismarch12thtoday.athalfpasteight，alltheteachersandstudentsinourschoolgatheredinfrontoftheschoolgate.thenwewentonfoottothewesternhilltoplanttrees.

beforewestartedworking，theteachergaveusatalkontheimportanceofplantingtrees.hesaidthattreescanhelptokeeptheairclean，protectusfromstrongwindandsandandmakeourcitymorebeautiful.thenheshowedushowtoplanttreesandaskedeachofustoplantatleastfivetrees.